Rationale:
This written task specifically relates to the study of
language and identity including cultural identity, focusing on the importance
and relationship between language and identity including loss of language,
identity, and lack of involving in cultural identity as living in the
international society.
After reading the article “Language loss, Identity, and
English as an international language”, Adel Dastgoshadeh and Kaveh Jalizadah
describe the importance of language linked to identity, and the loss of
language which affect the way of perceiving identity and acquiring knowledge of
our culture. They also address the issues of using international language,
which will decrease the ability of acquiring different identities, cultural
knowledge, resulting to the lost of knowledge, human history and information in
particular race or ethnicity. Meanwhile, they remark that international
language provides opportunity for unlimited information exchange. However,
inequality in using language is a way loss of identity occurs. Hence, from the
point they made, I believe that the lost of language, which most likely to be
mother tongue, can be occurred within international society resulting to the
lost of identity and culture knowledge.
Nowadays,
Students will have to use English as a general language when studying and
living abroad. I realize that first language is very affective in showing our identity
and particular culture. However, how important and useful of first language is
in an international society? Should we maintain our first language? How do we lose
our first language? These are basic questions we hear. Hence, I decided to
write a blog about student who studies abroad, experiencing these problems
himself, because blog allows narrator to give some opinion about the
experiences. Blog is intended to be personal experience blog. Therefore, it
shouldn’t be other text type as newspaper, and the intended audiences will be
general students and parents who decide to live abroad.
Written Task:
Blog:
Hello everyone, I’m writing from Abu Dhabi, where
it’s burning hot today. In today’s blog I’m going to talk about the importance
of dialect from what I experienced. In the part of my journey living as an international
student, I’ve seen myself and many people living abroad, who are losing their
identity when they lose their dialect. I know that being bilingual is
beneficial because I can explore the world much better. Since I’ve lived in the
Abu Dhabi, English always plays important role for me and everyone. However,
is it always good to use English instead of dialect every day? And what is the
importance of dialect in the international society? These two questions came
into my mind when I experienced the lack of communication by myself.
Yesterday, when I talked to my mom about the
celebration day of my country, I couldn’t express what I really wanted to ask
because I forgot the specific vocabulary that explains the actual meaning of
the event. Furthermore, when my little brother asked me about the symbol of my
country king’s throne, I know what it means but I really couldn’t take the word
out of my head. The word I said was every vague and meaningless; this is where
my realization about using only English instead of dialect came out. Using only
English gives me more problem than using both languages. Therefore, I don’t
agree with using only English in daily life, but it is still important to
comprehend English because it’s how you communicate in this society.
As I’m living
in Abu Dhabi, which is an international society, I realized that the importance
of my dialect becomes lesser overtime. I have to use English everywhere and
every day to communicate, to study and to live. Hence, I rarely use my dialect
resulting that I sometimes forget vocabulary. Meanwhile, my mom also encourages
me to use English with my little brother every day so that he can practice
using English. This command implies to me that the importance of it almost
gone. I have strongly feeling that we need to do something with this because
why? It is because dialect identifies my identity and I still need dialect to
communicate with people who came from similar culture. There are still national
day and many important day celebrations where I spent time doing my cultural
activities every year. I need dialect to get involve within these activities.
Although English is important, as I’ve lived here for many years I saw many
effects occurring because the gradually lost of dialect. The most obvious one
is people lost access in their initial culture, and they are losing their true
fundamental and identity.
When meeting new people in school, language is the
first thing I used to identify people. I know who they are by observing their
pronunciation, acting, and speaking style. Once when I was in restroom, I
accidently heard other students gossiping their teacher. I was curious enough
that I try to identify them by listening to what they said because it implies
what gender, age and sometimes nationality from the sound expressed. However, I
couldn’t identify efficiently because they are using English. I could have
identified them more efficiently if they had used their dialect. Since in each
dialect has unique expression in its own, it clicks in my head that dialect
plays important role in identifying people’s identity. Furthermore in my
English lesson, teacher said that we will lose our human historical and unique
knowledge if dialect is disappeared, and this problem mostly happens with young
people.
Once I worked on my CAS in primary school, I’ve seen
many non-native English speaking kids, who supposed to have their dialect but
they were born and raised within international society, using English as
primary language. Then, the question came directly into my head. Oh!! What will
happen with their dialect and identity?
In my opinion, the kid will not have opportunity to
study an actual dialect, which leads to the lost; because of environment around
them is international society. It wasn’t surprise that my opinion was true
because I’ve seen kids in primary school can only speak one language. Although
the kids have dialect, they only speak English with their parents. With losing
dialect, kids will not be able to access their fundamental culture. They will
not gain various and unique perspective from their home country because of lack
of communication, which occur when losing dialect. Furthermore in my English
lesson, my teacher said that when losing dialect, the initial identity also
lost, and changed to new identity.
It is indeed that their identities deviate from the
original. I observed Cambodian kid in Primary school, who supposed to familiar
with Asian lifestyle and culture, but the kid is living with European
lifestyle. In this case, his cultural identity changed by living and studying
in the international society. He bought European food, such as bread and
sandwiches, instead of rice or noodle for many days. I know this is a simple
observation. However, another observation is that he tended to stay and talk
with European students rather than Asians. This shows that losing dialect and
having new language are affecting identity. He might be able to get negative
responses when trying to access his actual culture because the networking and
social relation is cut due to the lost of dialect. With this observation, I can
say that the changes in language are also losing in initial identity to another
identity.
I think, it’s been a long day now. Being bilingual who
live or study abroad is good and beneficial because you can explore the world
much better. However, consideration about maintaining our dialect should be
kept in our mind because the effect of losing dialect is huge. Identity can be
deviated or lost, and access to community and culture can be a lot harder.
Therefore, dialect is important.
Your rationale is good, it clearly states why you have chosen this topic and I can see how it is important to you. I think that writing about the limitations of not being able to speak your first language is a very good topic.
ReplyDeleteI do think that you should do some paragraphing and correcting some grammatical mistakes. Other than that I think your written task explains the topic very well, good job.